Hey Group...

Sin Tara suggested i let everyone know what we discussed on the phone this afternoon with my entrance to the story...

first off...theres another part of the first response that I have to install.
2nd as discussed with Sin ...I am going to rescue all 3 women in the dark mountain (Shiloh, Chantra,Miranda) . Noone will be aqble to find them for now AS all 3 are dying and im taking them back to another location away from the compound.

Speak to Sin about it.

Let me make sure I have this correct:

Your character will single handedly go into a nest of pissed off Lizonians that have poisonous saliva and are seasoned warriors where a witch of the dark arts is also holed up with them and rescue three badly injured women who are capable of fighting but not up to full strength?

I see this as a bit of God moding, but this isn't my story to moderate so if Sin says that's the way she wants it, then I suppose we'll have to wait and see how this will play out.

I was under the impression the caverns the Lizonians used were tunnels in the mountains, not big enough for a full grown dragon to fly around in. If the caverns were to be bigger and able to hold a dragon with wings spread, I missed it somewhere.

Those were my thoughts as well RP, but as you say this is Sin's story line.

oK I hear all of you...and i hate the word god modding...since the days of Myridden's Keep story...

Sin has rethought about the post...and Im stuck in the middle of this...so ill just remove the post all together and quietly do my own thing and somehow work my way into the storyeventually...that way everybody stays happy and the word god modding goes away.

Easy

Here's what I suggest, Easy,

The Varden have come to meet up witht he Riders and crew from the compound. Wouldn't it be logical for your character to meet up with them and join the fun that way instead of heading off alone?

I think it would flow better in the long run and keep things moving along at a nice pace as well as allow for the addition of another into the story.

Remember, here at Bifrost, we're all about collaborative story telling. We like for all of our characters to get the same amount of action. While I know it's difficult to do at times, we try our hardest to make sure we leave room for the others.

im changing the post...hope this is better...Easy

I can attest to it being diffcult at times, but in the long run it makes for a better collabrative story. We seem to all feed off eachother creatively. ( Covers fangs with lips ) It also tends to make us all more creative in my opinion. Thanks Easy.

I am putting the compound up by Danar, in the green area by the coast. The Varden stronghold can then be hidden inside the mountain range that is there. Does everyone agree with this? Just not sure how to make the changes on the map.

ok...im not one to change or disrupt the flow...I hope everyone liked what I posted this time around.

In the details of making this turn of events...coming from the other side of the mountain...my character actually fell into the belly of the mountain slipping through one way hidden doors that got him into the maze quickly.

No one expected him to slip in the back way...and my character wasnt there to rescue anyone...if you remember he was being watched by a demon...a mirrored image that he couldnt intepret, then he became trapped.

So in the next scenero...im not there to pull off a single hero routine rescue...if that is what youre thinking. Cuz again that would ruin the story...

I will tell you that the auntie is gonna be pissed but we wont be found...



Easy

Just so I understand, Easy has advanced the story by three months while the rest of the group is still back at the day the women were taken and 'rescued' by Mohran?

We're gonna all be scewed on the time frame if that's the case.

I guess I'll have to do the best I can to try and make sense of the time difference.

Well I for one am staying in the time period of my last post. Which would be when we were attacked. I am not jumping ahead three months.

Easy, your post was good, but I would ask that you change the part about Shiloh's fingers. The diluted acidic saliva that Serena used in the torture would not do that to her fingertips. It's meant to simply burn within the initial wound, not around it or outside of it. And, Miranda is the one with the chest wounds, not Shiloh. LOL

Sorry to see you go, Lac. Is everything okay? Or is there a reason on why you're leaving?

Braum's death was always in my plans as are other things.

sorry girls I can change post...

Sin I thought you wanted drama///no big deal Ill change the post...