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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:26 am

Cool. So I guess you guys will just have to 'role-play' it from here. Like I said, the heroes can't know for sure why the enforcers aren't coming out of the van but they are also just sitting there keeping their head lights on Morgan.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:39 am

Oh, I'm also assuming that Tim's hummer is no where in sight. If the RAID enforcers would have seen the vehicle they probably just would have headed back to Lake Pleasant and tried to find a land line phone that they can use to call for help. Since she's alone they feel obligated to at least watch over her in case any other cars come driving down the road.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:57 am

No, the Hummer is sitting sideways, blocking the road with the flashers on, Tim is no where in sight. They would not know if he was still in the vehicle and injured. Furthermore I would assume, if they are following protacal, they would not be able to exit the vehicle to make a call on a land line.
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:08 am

No they wouldn't. But with there communications down, it would be the safest thing they could do.

I didn't realize that the Hummer was in sight I'll make another modification in my post to accommodate that so the stage is set properly.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:14 am

Ok
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:20 am

No worries anyways. They will be getting out of the van, I just can't stand when people go against their training, you see it in the movies all the time. It's maddening.

Realistically I don't think the RAID enforcers would leave their van but to keep the story rolling I'll have them get out and do their thing. I just wanted to establish a believable reason for their actions rather than just have them wander out without a care in the world into a situation that they have been prepared to deal with.

Books and movies are filled with guards who don't seem to have much common sense. Pete is one of them so he'll be running out to his demise pretty soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:19 pm

So I have placed Stan in a prime position for an encounter and have used their own technology against them. I don't think the truck can be restarted and driven until 2:22 or something like that. This should be Shadow's cue to act, he has to get the enforcer before he seals himself in the back with Sean.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:30 pm

You guys can take over the RAID enforcers now. Pete's caught and Stan's in a vulnerable position so there is no real need for any opposition. It will be quicker and easier for the rest of you to just write your posts and finish off the enforcers in whatever way you think would suit your characters. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:30 pm

Jack you now decide the fate of the RAID enforcer, Stan and control the situation in the cab of the truck. In order, to keep the story running smoothly, you will have to write the struggle that will occur between Shadow and Stan. I am no longer operating the enforcers, so it is up to all the other writers whose characters are trying to free, Shawn, to now write what happens to the enforcers.

If you can please re-write you post in more of a story telling style and consider the actions of the RAID enforcer who would have been at the moment of Shadow's appearance planning on going into the back of the van through the door he just opened. Of course, he never made it, since Shadow beat him to the door.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:10 am

Nice work Lac, that kept everything moving rather smoothly Smile Now you just gotta unplug Demon and Kasai can jump in.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:36 pm

That was sweet Kasai... Zoe is so kewl! Oh and Sin, good call with Frank holding off on calling Birkshire, that just would've stirred up a hornet's nest right now. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:36 am

Thanks! alien

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:10 pm

By my estimation Tim is about sixty miles east of Bernhards Bay which is about 0:45 - 0:50 minutes. Does that sound about right?
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Wed Aug 12, 2009 3:28 pm

SOunds about right to me.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Wed Aug 12, 2009 3:32 pm

Hope that post makes sense. Lemme know if it doesn't and I'll rework it to make it work.

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