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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:14 pm

Okay, Tiph. Now, I know which detention center Morgan is going to, what I don't know is how to play out the 'finding out what her abilities are' scenario. I will do the best I can and if changes need to be made, please tell me and I will make them.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:11 pm

Okay, so basically, Morgan is being taken to a secret base, somewhere around the town of Childress, Texas, which is near the Oklahoma state line. I say, 'secret' because its kept off the maps, but the locals would be well aware of the compound. It will be surrounded by a razor wire and electric fence with signs all over saying something like, No Trespassing by order of R.A.I.D. Nothing advertising what the facility actually is, but no one is going to risk trespassing.

At the processing station they will decide which facility to send, Morgan to. As I mentioned, it would logically be West or East, I don't think they'd ship her South or up to Canada's Northern Detention Facility. Where she goes is up to you, I wrote in that Wraith is thinking the Eastern one, but he is unaware of the three others.

As I also mentioned the testing at the processing compound is quite primitive to what they have at a detention centre. Basically, they can only inquire and hope that the prisoner is compliant since any tests that they try, the mutant could probably fake their way through, after all they are not going to endanger the Meta's life.

I think that Morgan would probably be at the Processing compound, awaiting judgment for a day. If you pause at some point in your story because you are unsure how to proceed and I can jump in and carry on the roles of RAID. I am usually pretty good at portraying government types.

At the detention center they will probably start with drugs to create hallucinations in order to force the mutant to use their powers in a defensive fashion. This would of course, be just one of several methods. In my opinion, once they have you, I just assume that they will eventually learn what your powers are either through some sort of test or passive torture, such as limited food and isolation.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:13 pm

Someone else that I think would probably excel at portraying RAID would be Sir Easy. Maybe he might want to jump into a black and red suit at some time.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:31 am

I am a little stumped. I have been racking my brains trying to figure out why Morgan's defense attorney, Miss White (Sara-lynn) would be on the same plane along with a prisoner on her flight to Buffalo?

Sara-lynn hovers between a Community Character and a Personal NPC of Wraith so there is absolutely no problem with other writers moving her along, but please support your reasoning when she is suddenly moved from one setting to another. It's a little confusing.

Until, Sigma's telephone conversation with Seizure continues, the scene is somewhat frozen for now. No rush at the moment.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:45 am

Oh, sorry. Embarassed Hadn't really thought about it like that, but it makes sense now that you mention it. I will change it, hon. It's not a problem. I should have paid closer attention. Sorry.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:50 am

Okay, correction made.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:03 am

No worries. When you move NPC's and Community Character's around it's just good practice to support why it is they are doing the things they do. Smile

That way when someone else take over for them they're not left wondering.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:44 am

I created another storyline called, 'Coming Up Roses' in the Independent Story line forum since right now the main story line cannot progress with Kasai's input. Which is fine, we all can't post every day, but if the delay lasts longer than a week we'll have to break the dam and flow past.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Tue Nov 02, 2010 10:57 pm

#%*%^!! I'm so sorry! I completely forgot to tell you I was out of town this weekend! It's NaNoWriMo now so it may be a bit hard but I promise promise promise I will get back on this! Embarassed

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:11 pm

Hey Tiph.....everything okay? You've gone MIA. LOL

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:47 pm

What am I supposed to do with Morgan now that Tiph is apparantly gone? Write her off or what?

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Sun Feb 13, 2011 5:29 pm

I underestand your confusion, but it is your character. You must decide what to do with it. Wheather to have the character continue and build within what ever directiion the story leads, or abondon it. We are all trying to pick up the pieces left by Tiph's decision to leave. Much as RPM, I and others have done when the 9 worlds collapsed as well as the other threads that Tiph was involved in.

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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos   Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:10 pm

Okay. Well.....I honestly don't know what to do with her. I don't see any way for her to escape her captors so perhaps I will create a new character.....don't know yet.

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