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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:30 pm

Good post, Easy. I like where the story is headed.

We'll just right away our end and I think we should do what I like to refer as a 'Chinese Time Lapse'. I've watched a lot of kung-fu movies and without any lead up or explanation time just lapses weeks or even months in their stories.

Sandy, Bones, Maddie and Chase will arrive at Coyote Hills and we won't worry too much about adhering to a specified time line. We'll just write it out and hopefully we get to the town sooner rather than later. The pieces should just naturally fall in to place.

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:20 pm

thanks and agreed I think the story has lots of potential to get even better...

Wwait until you see what our mastermind villian is up to next...and the out of town visitor that shows up from Back East...

it gets even better


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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:23 am

Updated the city map of Shady Gulch
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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:41 pm

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Can you play the NPC Coyote Hills Marshal?

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:37 pm

By your last post, are you indicating that you want me to have Maddie follow Sandy and Bones? I don't want to read it wrong, but at the same time, Maddie would have a heck of a time staying put.

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 1:43 am

Why I would be delighted to portray the Marshal of Coyote Hills, Easy. By the way nice work on the plot, you've added some great depth to McIntire and in turn added a lot meat to the story.

Sub Bear and I will work the Marshall, it will be easier that way.



This how I picture him. He's smart, not just another hired gun, but a businessman not unlike McIntire, perhaps even aspiring to become a partner, of course we all know McIntire doesn't take to kindly in sharing his power. Marshall Barr is gunning to become as powerful as McIntire, but right now he's comfortable being in the man's pocket. He used to be an outlaw gunslinger himself and is known for his quick draw which some testify is the fastest in the West (people in small towns always say that) but he's never gone up against Bones.

Barr also thinks like a business man. He's not going to want to go and shoot up his town if he can help it, and he also wants Sandy, Bones, Maddie and Chase alive, so they can be properly hanged. They are worth more alive than dead, and Barr likes to make a profit.

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In answer to your query Sin. I wasn't actually trying to foreshadow but more just keeping Sandy in character and anticipating what the stubborn, Keegan girl might do. It's in her character to be defiant so it would make sense for her to head into town. Not that she has to. So long as a writer doesn't blatantly write uncharacteristically anything can happen.

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 5:19 am

Burt Lancaster...very cool Marshal

Ive gathered up some photos that I'd like you to do your magic on WH McCabe to enter him in the 1880s storyline. Ill try and take care of uploading them in the gallery tomorrow morning. By the way, is there a way I can delete some of the photos Im not using in the gallery or do you need a admin right to do so?

Im sick at home this week with walking pneumonia, diagnosed in the hospital ER on Sunday morning..i'd say its was not a planned event.

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:18 am

Pneumonia! Well take it easy, uh... Sir Easy. Smile

To delete photos, click on the them and use the drop down menu above them. You will find delete in there. Anyone can delete photos out of their own gallery.

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:47 am

Not Burt Lancaster but Kirk Douglas
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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:43 am

I like the Marshal-nice flesh out Tiph

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 11:55 am

Get well soon, get some Zycam and some rest
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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:17 pm

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ahhh the codene syrup is knocking me down Ive slept more this week then ever...Opps my mistake it is Kirk Douglas.

MAP ?

I think we should add the Territorial map Lac found on the internet?

Do we need to add another city map.. one for Coyote Hills too

TIME?

Time: 1861

ok with everyone?


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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:26 pm

1861 is fine with me
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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:34 pm

Oh, yeah. I was assuming it was 1861.

Coyote Hill's Map? Well, let's just see how much time we end up sticking around there. If it develops we'll throw a map together based on the locations that people have written.

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PostSubject: Re: SPURS N SIX GUNS - OOC   Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:24 am

Added maps to Lands & Peoples Glossary
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